Inuzuka Shikon New Look

I'm aware her skin is too orange. I picked the wrong color pencil and then colored too hard. Anyway, I couldn't help but feel like I should modify my character for Naruto. I changed her outfit and this sketch is better than my other ones. It took me like an hour to do. Okay, so about Shikon:

Name: Shikon Inuzuka
Age: 12-13 Part 1, 15-16 Part 2.
Birthday: July 7th
Rank: Chuunin in part 1, Jounin and then Hokage in part 2.
Clan: Inuzuka Clan
Family: Hana (Older Sister), Kiba (Twin Brother), Tsume (Mother)
Love Interest: Shikamaru
Personality: Shikon comes off as a cold person. People assume that she will leave a comrade to die if they are deadweight, or that she doesn't care for the village or her clan at all. She's very misunderstood. Her best friends are Kouba Ibuka and Shichiyou Getsuei. Her dog's name is Hinoirimaru. She never smiles or shows any emotion, although when asked about it, she says that its impossible to block out all emotions, indicating that she's just good at hiding them. She will do anything for her brother and her worst fear is something happening to him.

Quotes:

"You're my brother and that's the end of it. There's a bond that can't be broken, even if we forget it's there. If anything ever happened to you, I'd never forgive myself for not being able to stop it."

"I have emotions, but I just don't show them. But you, it makes me wonder if you have no emotions at all."

"Just do as I say, and stay out of my way."

She also has a tendency to say inappropriate sarcastic comments at inappropriate times.

"Light travels faster than sound, that is why most people appear bright until they speak."

"It IS as bad as you think and they ARE out to get you."

Often times she annoys Shikamaru, just because she likes him. She's only tried one of her tricks twice.

"Actually, I was going to wait until you were deep in focus and yell 'ikachu I choose you!' but this was so much better."

"Pikachu I choose you!"

She only does this after her friends get her to loosen up a bit. She does not get along with Hana and they don't respect each other very much. In fact they act as though they hate each other.